MLA Papers/Essays
Literature
Grammar
National Exams
Englewood High School Courses
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- Write a word connected to a topic you want to explore:
for example, “friendship.”
- Create a table like the one below:
Trees |
Buildings |
Machines/Devices |
Emotions/Feelings |
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- Either in a group or individually, write words in each
column that in some way connect to the word “friendship” or the word you
have decided to explore.
Trees |
Buildings |
Machines/Devices |
Emotions/Feelings |
weeping willow |
skyscraper |
telephone |
love |
apple |
church |
blender |
hate |
cherry |
nursing home |
defibrillator |
happiness |
maple |
house |
toilet |
sadness |
redwood |
apartment |
lamp |
despair |
evergreen |
school |
toaster |
joy |
aspen |
hospital |
microwave |
belonging |
crabapple |
mausoleum |
shower |
comfort |
plum |
Statue of Liberty |
car |
unity |
palm |
Empire State Building |
bus |
safety |
- If a good idea pops into your head, begin writing
about how your word connects to an item in the table. You might already be
able to get a poem, essay, or story from just the table creation part of
synectics. Notice how each category lends itself to developing comparisons
between living and nonliving, abstract and concrete, manmade and natural
items. (Many years ago, one of my students wrote a fascinating poem
comparing friendship to a glass building: beautiful, but easily shattered
and hard to repair. Another student wrote an essay stating that
communicating with parents was like trying to row a boat across the Sahara.
One student, a refugee from Kosovo, wrote that gunfire was the music of her
childhood. The metaphors that can be generated just from the table can be
enormously powerful.)
- If more ideas are needed to begin writing a long
piece, then the next step is to circle or bold the most unusual item in each
column. By using synectics, writers move further away from the genesis
word, creating more unusual and interesting comparisons.
Trees |
Buildings |
Machines/Devices |
Emotions/
Feelings |
weeping
willow |
skyscraper |
telephone |
love |
apple |
church |
blender |
hate |
cherry |
nursing home |
defibrillator |
happiness |
maple |
house |
toilet |
sadness |
redwood |
apartment |
lamp |
despair |
evergreen |
school |
toaster |
joy |
aspen |
hospital |
microwave |
belonging |
crabapple |
mausoleum |
shower |
comfort |
plum |
Statue of
Liberty |
car |
unity |
palm |
Empire State Building |
bus |
safety |
- Now combine the items the class or you as an
individual decided are most unusual. You will make an oxymoron or a
compressed conflict: two words which actually could describe something but
which seem to be opposite to one another. For example, there is such a
thing as a jumbo shrimp, but the two words are opposites. Here’s a list
created from the sample table: weeping willow statue of liberty, weeping
willow toilet, weeping willow despair, despairing toilet, despairing Statue
of Liberty, despairing weeping willow, toilet Statue of Liberty, etc.
Identify and list places where your chosen item might exist. For example, if
your choice is a despairing toilet, you might write a list including
places like abandoned outhouses, broken-down apartments, etc.
- Personify your selected oxymoron as new, mature, old,
and reborn. Write down how you feel in each condition.
New |
Mature |
Old |
Reborn |
Ready to flush away despair |
Experienced, waiting for despair to disappear |
Tired |
Ready again |
Nervous |
Confident |
Weak |
Relieved |
Wanting help |
Independent |
Wanting help |
Independent |
8. Look back over all that you
have written. Write one or more stanzas or paragraphs that develop your extended
metaphor. One of my students wrote an essay explaining that being an immigrant
was like being constipated in a bathroom. His explanation was both humorous and
enlightening.
Content |
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Provides creative
title and one or more stanzas or paragraphs |
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Uses sensory details and precise words to
create an impression, mood, or feeling |
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Form |
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Focuses on one
metaphor throughout the work |
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Groups related ideas into stanzas or paragraphs |
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Grammar, Usage, Spelling, and
Mechanics |
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Contains no more than two or three minor errors in grammar, usage,
spelling, and mechanics |
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